Friday, February 28, 2014

No Seconds and The Last Meal Project

The first website I visited was No Seconds. Honestly, the pictures caught me off guard. At first, I thought it was an advertisement. Then I realized that it was pictures of people’s last meal before being killed due to the death penalty. I found this very interesting. In my personal opinion, seeing the different plates of food with the description almost made me feel connected with them. It made me feel as if I knew their personality. I believe this was the author’s goal. I believe he was trying to argue the point that these criminals are people too and they enjoy the same types of foods as the rest of society. Having the information on the side including their name, their crime, and how they were killed definitely allowed the audience to feel like they knew this person, even though they didn't. The white background was simple and allowed you to focus on the pictures and the words. I believe this was the best way to showcase the last meals’ of these criminals.
The Last Meal Project was similar yet very different to No Seconds. It was obvious from the very first slide that this website was against the death penalty. The first paragraph was an introduction to this belief. Then, there were slides with pictures of the person, their name, what their last meal was, how they were killed and what state they were from. Pictures of the food they ate were also on the bottom of the picture of them. At first, I didn't think this was would be as effective as the picture of the meal, however, I was wrong. I definitely felt more emotion on this site. Looking into their eyes, knowing they were killed was definitely a lot harder than I imagined. I couldn't describe exactly what it was, but the emotion I felt was a lot stronger on this site. The pictures of the people make it real. When you look at a plate of food, even though it was someone’s last meal, you don’t physically see them and therefore don’t feel as much emotion. The Last Meal Project’s goal was to play with their audience’s emotions and they succeeded. They also included slides with information such as what the chemicals in a legal injection are and how much the drugs cost. While visually, these slides were plain, they played an important role. They were meant to be plain because it allowed the audience to focus on the word. I wouldn't do an

Overall, The Last Meal Project was the most compelling. It made me feel emotion while looking at the pictures. It made them believe in their cause and that is the whole purpose of the author. The words not only on the sides of the pictures but also on the blank slides contribute a lot to the presentation by making their audience informed. I would not change anything about the presentation.

Thursday, February 20, 2014

Reviewing my Speech

Watching myself presenting was definitely weird, but yet very helpful. Overall, I think my speech was pretty good. I was very prepared for it and really wanted to do good. I think that my introduction was the worst part by far. I look down at my note cards before every new sentence or topic. Then, I got tangled up on my words while saying my thesis and had to restart in order to say it the way I wanted to. I probably should have not practiced it so much word for word. Once I got into the body of my speech I seem to be less tense. Maybe it was because I was getting more comfortable with talking or maybe because I didn’t practice that part word for word so it was more laid back. However, I said “uhm”. Taking a public speaking class definitely taught me that filler words are unneeded and distracting and I have actually never said “uhm” before in a speech, so I’m basically mortified. I also said “like” about 4-5 times, which is also distracting and I should not do in the future. I think that as my speech went on, I spoke faster and faster. I have a HUGE problem with talking fast in general and being nervous just adds to the speed. I should have taken a breath and collected myself and slowed down. I thought that my body language with my hands was actually decent. In the past, I have been known to just stand there with no movement. This time however, I was good with the movement of my hands, but bad with the swaying. I shouldn’t have crossed my legs and should have walked around a little. Next time, I will make sure to slow down, not read off my note cards as much, not recite word for word to make it more casual, not say “uhm” or “like”, and have better body language.